Most of my poems are perfect performance poems.  I like to paint pictures with my words and bring in movement, and rhyme of course. Here's some advice for your own writing:

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Make your own poetry SHINE with double rhyming in lines perhaps,  faultless metre and fantastic description.  The Brown Hyena has double rhyming adjectives in each line and shines with a special glow.  Note the indentations of the lines, connected to the rhyming schemes.   I taught typewriting, as you can see.  Josie